Multimedia Dev 1

  TWITTER TASK list ava swan: @avaswan11 Cian O'Dwyer: @CianODwyer14 Godwill Ndifor: @ballerGodzy777 Cliodhna Moore: @CliodhnaMoore2 Claire Loakman CDM: @CdmClaire conor burke: @conorburke19 Melissa Gilmore: @Mel_ggxo #dmed2023 — Bernard MacDonagh (@BernardMacDon14) April 17, 2021

It was difficult but after weeks of research and editing I was able to make my section of the paper which was difficult at first as I had to find papers that I could read that didn't require a membership but once I did it was easy as once I had the necessary papers I just had to simply them as bibliographies. I then had to take all the bibliographies I had made and put them together and edit them in way that it makes scene to the reader splitting it into three sections a ppreciation, c hallenge and i mmersion. Once that was all done I was given comments on what to change or improve in my section. I then added all the papers that I used as researched as will as an Author Bio with some information about me. I then added some graphics and images mostly from the papers that I used as researched to my section of the paper. After all the work I have put into this piece I am quite proud of how it all turned out but I am always open to feedback on how to improve what I have made.  (scree

  TWITTER TASK What is it you all enjoy about this modal and what you don't? #dmed2023 — Bernard MacDonagh (@BernardMacDon14) March 27, 2021

For the most part the feedback from my group  I got was vary helpful in fixing up any mistakes I may have made or just improving what I all ready have. For the most part they said a few of my sentences where too long and suggested that I split them up into two or three smaller sentences. This was good advice as I have always had trouble deciding where to end one sentence and start another and this advises helped me fined when to split them up more. another piece was to rewrite some parts for example, in the intro I said "and see if they could add them to there future games" and they suggest I change it to "and  if they can incorporate certain game mechanics and techniques into their future games ". They all so spotted a few spelling errors and pointed them out to me so I could fix or get rid of them. As for the feed back I gave to my group, it was much of the same pointing out spelling errors, change the wording and of a sentence. https://docs.google.com/docume

I found this particular task to be rather difficult as this was different then what I was use to as in the past my intros and conclusion only had to be about two to three sentences long and reneging to be about 100 words but in this it had to be around 200 words which I found was was difficult to get too. Another thing that I found to be vary hard was  Draft a “Check your understanding” as I had no idea what that meant and was given no visual examples on so I decided to keep it simple and create a list of multiple choice questions for the reader an example being " Which of these is one of the themes: (1)Story, (2)Immersion,  (3)Fun". However I am open to feedback and suggestion on how to improve it so if there are any problems with it I will redo it for the final version of the paper. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1UfPnH5B_i6e5_J09sylvjj848N0mO-FAeuV2nZrFOKU/edit?usp=sharing

  TWITTER TASK 13 Unity has bean a great help as it has shown me how to make 3D games and is now showing me how to make 2D which so far seam much easier. — Bernard MacDonagh (@BernardMacDon14) March 20, 2021